~Haikus~
It's pretty black and blue
So well then, who are you to
Be like such a bruise
Her eyes are red
And oh how she makes them dread
What she has said
~Seven line poem~
1 She has such crimson eyes
2 Her dark blue sky is such a lie
3 Such is life, what a cabaret
4 But suck it up, buttercup
5. You are a night flower,
6. Who has no mystical power
7 Locked away in the rose garden
Words to live by! "Suck it up, buttercup" : )
ReplyDeleteHi, Amanda! I absolutely adore your poetry! It flows so well, and paints a beautiful picture (even though it is the color pieces and it is supposed to be have exceptional imagery, yours is just fantastic). In your seven line poem, I love how you had a very unique approach to the different colors. If I think of crimson, my first thought would be of blood. You took the poem to a different level, and said, “She has such crimson eyes.” That is really creative, and it is easy to imagine a girl with crimson eyes. In your first haiku, I also liked how you connected black and blue at the beginning of the poem to a bruise at the ending. It was a good way to link the colors to something that is easy to relate to in everybody’s life. Fantastic poems!
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